Woman iv/v
by AxI can see your colours that fill,
every inch that is naked from a soul,
that feels the essence of being a woman,
wanted by another in a need to hold.I can see the colours swirling over flesh,
drawing a mystery over time expressed,
taking the challenge to impress,
reading the truths with honour and respect.I can see more colours that comes from inside,
where the deepest secrets reside,
harbored safe from hurtful eyes,
saved for the grace of a pure hearts cry.Ax
Chronologically, this is the first of the Woman v series that I read and became the impetus for my review of this series. Ax, thank you, again for this unique experience!
The four-line stanza structure remains from i-iii, still with a freer appearance that began in iii. Each stanza begins with the poet describing what he can see in his Goddess from her flesh to her soul.
The poet sees his Goddess now in living colour, and can peek into the parts of her that make her whole; even the parts she usually hides. Naked before him, he can see the truth of who she is, while honouring and respecting her. He can see where she has hidden behind the mask and sought approval in taking the challenge to impress. He understands her reason for having kept her greatness a secret from the judgment of others.
In i the poet creates his Goddess. In ii he conquers and claims her. In iii he melds with her. Now in iv he sees her as unique; he understands her, maybe even better than she understands herself. He sees her now as his soul mate or twin flame.
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__/|\__ Metta
2016.02.13
Beautifully expressed
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Thank you! I feel like Ax did all the work. Have a great day!
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Wonderful, Tiffany
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Thank you! This was the most challenging for me. Had to really look at myself…and my own desires as a woman to feel what Ax describes here. So glad you enjoyed it and dropped by!
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It truly was a wonderful exploration. You are quite talented and intuitive, Tiffany. It’s a pleasure to have found my way to your words.
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Aww! Many thank yous all around! I am in equal measure enjoying your work! You and I could share some fun times. I love your wit and feistiness. You, too, have a way with words.
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Have a great day, love ❤️
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You, too, Rita! ❤️💕
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Hugs and hugs, thank you again and again
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You’re so very welcome! It has been a great learning experience.
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🙂 big smiles!
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