the dive began over a week ago.
moments of bliss intermix,
Lucid dreams, sweet bliss
Now seem just a memory.
Diving headlong, how far
Down the rabbit hole
Before I forget how to
find my way back home?
~~
The pressure of the
Benthic zone presses
On bones and ears.
The pain, not quite excruciating
Makes it hard to hear my muse.
Left dazed and somewhat confused.
Resisting the surrender.
The very thing I know
To be the key to my release
And return to the surface
To breathe again
To see with emerald eyes again
To feel bliss again
(Know friends I’m slowly ascending)
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You are unbelievable :), just a well of great content over and over- the pressure will cease once you hit the surface – and hoping it is soon for you.
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Thank you, Wayne! Yes, I’m breathing fresh air again. The follow up posts soonish.
Thank you for the compliments! And support, always! It goes both ways.❤️❤️❤️ Tiffany
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Lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you! I appreciate the read and comment ❤️ Tiffany
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Ah, to be in the depths and then come up to the surface again. Lovely writing. I wish you light, clarity and peace.
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Thank you, Miriam! Any cooling relief for you yet?! I hope so!
Yes, I’m breathing fresh air again! I can’t write when I’m in the abyss. Thought I’d only get the starseeds duet today and now I’m just posting away!
Thank you for the loving and caring thoughts. The follow up to this will post soonish!❤️❤️❤️Tiffany
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Yep, things are cooler here. Thanks Tiffany. 🙂 Waiting for things to happen, wrote about it last night. Keep posting and writing. Sending warm hugs. xx
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I had to shut off WP last night… I’ll read now, thank you for letting me know!
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Reblogged this on Junior Chills and commented:
Very nice indeed!! Very powerful piece…especially the thoughts it evokes of depression and possible mental health problems!!!
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